Hi Michael - I can tell you are very excited to have this document completed! In the table, you have 0.34 deg^2 for the SNAP FOV, which is only the CCD area. There's an additional 0.34 deg^2 of NIR detector area which should be counted. The pixel scale is 0.18" on the NIR side. The Image Quality for SNAP is worse than the diffraction-limited 0.09" you report, because of aberrations, charge diffusion, and pixelization. A number more like 0.15 would be appropriate at 700 nm, as far as calculating a point-source figure of merit. The figure of merit given is the speed for background-limited point sources. As such it should have the sky brightness in the denominator. For the 3 ground-based observatories, this can be omitted because they're all the same, but for SNAP there is an additional gain of factor of 7 at R band in dark moon, growing very rapidly toward the IR. I think these correction make the FOM=420 for SNAP if we take the R-band sky brightness factor. The Figure of Merit might also include a duty cycle (3x better on orbit), but this is mentioned in your table Notes, which is probably a simpler way to present things. I believe that DEC will not be competing for CTIO time, but will rather have a grant of some fraction of the telescope time. In the p4 text, I'd say "SNAP..., a space-based mission to measure Type Ia Supernovae to redshift 1.7,...." In the Table, a couple of typos: "Tescope" -> "Telescope" You probably want "Pixel Scale" instead of "Plate Scale" Image Quality might say "(arcsec FWHM)" -Gary LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST Mailing List Server LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST This is message 231 in the lsst-general archive, URL LSST http://www.astro.princeton.edu/~dss/LSST/lsst-general/msg.231.html LSST http://www.astro.princeton.edu/cgi-bin/LSSTmailinglists.pl/show_subscription?list=lsst-general LSST The index is at http://www.astro.princeton.edu/~dss/LSST/lsst-general/INDEX.html LSST To join/leave the list, send mail to lsst-request@astro.princeton.edu LSST To post a message, mail it to lsst-general@astro.princeton.edu LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST LSST